Rough Draft #1

"Aghhhh!"I yelled as I tried to step the breack on my quad. "STOP!!!!!" said my cousin because we were about to crash.
I had no choice, I had to dodge my cousin. It's just a little hill I thought. I was already half way up the hill, I would fall if I stayed there thinking. I went for it, I went all the way to the top of the hill but there wasnt enough space for both of us on the top. Then agin I had to think should I go all the way down on go into the weeds and brush? and all a sudden i fell! I went down hill!! Nothing I could do exept fall into the huge rocks. Eeeeeeek! The quad was stopped by one of the rocks and now i'm up in the air!
"Jocelyne are you okay?" said my cousin. I was on the floor, my nose hurt A LOT so i just groaned. I felt cool blood running down my face, I was scared as a mouse to a mouse trap. I was shoked, i couldn't move, all i saw was the huge quad that was like 5 inches away, it can runover me.
When my cousin went to get help all i did was cry. I reamembered thet day my mom told me that quads were dangerous, i said i could do it and that nothing would happen.
My cousin came back with my uncle. They took off my helmet and cleaned all the blood on my face they took me home.