Tuesday, April 15, 2008

Incorporating dialog w/geture

In my Rough draft #2 I added:

"But I wore a helmet" I cried while feeling my nose.

"Well...I'm sorry"the doctor sighed going out of the room.

"Jocelyne are you okay? " said my cousin looking down at me
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